re: How To Land Your First IT Job
Definitely - I proofread a lot of emails, resumes and other correspondence. A second opinion is important.
I recommended something along these lines:
"Dear XX, Thank you for considering me for the xxx position. As a new graduate, the interview experience was invaluable, especially [insert a specific example of someone whom you found interesting]. While I am of course disappointed in not being chosen, I'm certain the process will help me in the future. Would it be possible for you to provide feedback on my performance, or even general recommendations on how to improve my interviewing skills? Any input will be much appreciated. Regards, xxx"